Friday, December 3, 2010

Adventure Story
Two years ago there was a famous mountain climber named Lola. I was a science project that she knows how to climb a mountain. One day Lola was in her personal jet to visit her family at the zoo. But the pilot fell fast asleep, and he forgot to turn on auto pilot. Then the air plain came crashing down. When Lola woke up she found herself in the “North Way Shopping Mall”. Lola had herd about this place she was so excited.
            She walked into the front door. As soon as she walked threw the door she had Dash avow. She saw herself going to this place when she was little with dad. She also remembered that there was a Mt. called Mount Everest. Since she was a mountain climber she had always wanted to climb it. As Lola was rushing to the Mountain she ran into a letter that had her name on it. She picked it up it wasn’t regular paper it was a paper from a long time ago. She grabbed it and ran up to check out. After Lola was done checking out she ran to the mountain. When she got there she saw that she was racing against Big Foot!!! She could not believe what she saw but there was no time for that. The race was on.
            Lola was not scared she was ready. As soon as the race started Lola was all ready in the lead. But then Big Foot put his foot out so that she would fall off. When Lola fell off she was ferrous. But then she remembered the note, so she pulled it out and started to read it. It said “Dear Lola you are probably loosing the race right know. But I hope you remember this place, I use to take you her all the time when you were little. You were probably wondering ware I have been all your life but look up I’m her. Press this button and you will win.” When Lola pressed the button a jet pack came out, and before she knew it she was all ready at the top. She won she beet Big Foot.
            After the race Lola went up to Big Foot and said “Hi dad”. And she gave him a kiss on the cheek and he did to. Lola was so happy that she had found her dad. Lola learned not to give up on something keep going.
Two days later
Lola had bring her dad with her to the family reunion at the zoo. And oh boy that was a mess. A little kid thought he was a monster and well you know things went pretty bad!!!

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

What is Thanksgiving about?
I think Thanksgiving is about giving thanks to the people who gives you all of your privileges. I think it is about spending time with your family. I also believe it is about eating until you get sick well that’s what my dad thinks!!! I think people should go out and get their own turkey. That is what I think thanks giving are about.  

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

20 things I am thankful for…

I am thankful for a nice cozy bed to sleep in every night
I am thankful for having a heated house when it is cold outside
I am thankful for having a loving family
I am thankful for having a nice warm dinner on Thanksgiving
I am thankful for my awesome room
I am thankful for my beautiful home
I am thankful for living in a far, free, caring country to live in
I am thankful for being able to play my favorite sport
I am thankful of all of my cute cloths
I am thankful for all of my cute shoes
I am thankful for all of my technology
I am thankful for all of my awesome, funny, caring friends
I am thankful for my little baby brother
I am thankful for being able to have the stuff that I have
I am thankful for having all of the privileges that I have
I am thankful for being able to go to school
I am thankful for having a car to get me ware I want to go
I am thankful for all of my delicious food that I eat every night
I am thankful for being able to go to Blake Friday every year
I am thankful for being able to listen to music

Friday, October 22, 2010

How to write a good interduction

A good interduction to me is not showing to much or to little. Also having a good sneek peek.
A example of a good intro:
The past should be left alone because it no longer exists. Yet, it is good that I still own my memories. Things I want to engrave, or the things I want to forget, will leave traces in my minds. Sometimes recollection is a joy. Memory is like putting together the puzzle pieces of previous experiences. I believe memory is the core of the soul — like the bulb in the light, without it the light cannot shine.
A example of a bad intro:
Leave the past alone. I believe in memory.